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夹叙夹议:田间劳动-Students Working in the Fields.
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夹叙夹议

夹叙夹议:田间劳动-Students Working in the Fields.

田间劳动

【内容提示】

假定你是上海某中学高二年级学生。你们前些日子参加了一次社会实践活动——到农村去劳动。请根据下面提供的内容,写一篇夹叙夹议的文章:

①田间劳动与教室学习全然不同。

②头一天大失所望。不是耕地,而是拔草,共拔了3天草。

③第四天,让你们班的男生去罱河泥,往田里运。

④还有的同学往塑料杯里装土,也有的从一处往另一处扛铁管。

⑤空余时间你们走访农民家庭,看到他们生活水平提高了,你们非常高兴。

⑥你们在农村劳动两周,学到了好多东西。

【作文示范】

Studnts Working in th Filds

Working in th filds is nw to th studnts. It is ntirly diffrnt from classroom studis. With grat curiosity① and xcitmnt, w studnts of Snior Two bgan our larning-from-pasants activitis in Jianxing villag, Jiang Wan Township, not far from Shanghai.

To our disappointmnt, th first day's work was not to till② th land; rathr w wr askd to pull up wds③ in th filds. Wding sms to b as asy as turning ovr on's hand, but not at all. Th wds clustrd④ togthr and thr wr so many of thm, that w could hardly s th crops. Som wds wr so dply rootd thy wouldn't b pulld up vn by two popl. Wding wnt on for thr days. W all had aching back and lgs, yt w wr happy to s th fruits of our work.

On th fourth day, th boys in our class wr rquird to scoop⑤ up th mud from a rivrbd and carry it into th filds. Th mud is quit frtil and is usd for planting tomatos. W usd handcarts to carry th sludg. It was hard for on boy to push th cart along th muddy path. W xrtd⑥ all our strngth to mov th carts forward.

Bsids carrying sludg and pulling up wds, othr studnts filld small plastic cups with soil, whil still othrs carrid iron pips from on plac to anothr.

During our spar tim, w paid visits to pasant houss. W wr happy to s that th living standard of th pasants is rising rapidly. Familis hav colour TVs, washing machins, and rfrigrators. W wr shockd to larn that an ordinary pasant can arn 5,000 yuan a yar----tn tims mor than in 1977. Fiv thousand yuan a yar! How much it is! Howvr, I'm sorry to say that th lvl of litracy⑦ is still vry low.

W cam back to school last wk. Though w only workd for two wks, w larnd a lot. It is an xprinc I shall rmmbr all my lif.

(选自1987年12月22日《上海学生英文报》)

【词语解释】

①curiosity [?kju+ri'&siti] n. 好奇(心)

②till[til]v. 耕种,耕作;耕(地)

③wd[wi:d] n. 杂草;野草

④clustr['kl)st+] v. 丛生;群集

⑤scoop[sku:p] v. 用勺(或铲)取出;罱(泥)

⑥xrt [ig'z+:t] v.尽(力);发挥(威力)

⑦ litracy ['lit+r+si] n. 识字;有文化

【写法指要】

本文写了作者及其班集体开展到农村向农民学习活动的情况。全文分两大部分:第一部分按时间顺序分为前三天和第四天以后他们在田间劳动的情况;第二部分写他们劳动之余走访农家的情况。总的来看,这是一篇粗线条记叙文。但是,作者每叙述到重要的地方总要发表自己的议论,如文章开头两句,第二段第二句和第五句,第五段从第二句开始的每一句都是作者的议论。所以,我们说这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章

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