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举例说明:一个特殊的展览-A Special Show
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一个特殊的展览

举例说明:一个特殊的展览-A Special Show

【内容提示】

你和你的同班同学每天在一起学习,但是你知道他们在课余时间都干些什么吗?为了使同学们相互更加了解,你们班组织了一次特殊的展览。有的同学拿来绘画,有的拿来收集的邮票,有的拿来收藏的其他各种东西。通过展览同学们相互之间增强了了解,知道了各自的长处。请你就这一主题写一篇文章,要求举例说明你的篇题。

【作文示范】

A Spcial Show

Though w mt vry day in th school and study togthr , w know littl about what our classmats do in thir fr tim. In ordr to mak us undrstand ach othr bttr, our class hld a spcial show of our spar-tim hobbis on May 21. W namd th show “Spring's Call”.

vryon in our class took grat intrst in this show. W brought things mad or collctd by ourslvs to th school. Thr wr lots of picturs, such as watrcolour paintings, traditional Chins paintings and sktchs①. Som of thm wr so wll-don② that popl in th painting lookd lik ral. Thr wr works of pnmanship③ and stamps, too. Th bautiful stamps attracting our attntion wr from th U.S.A,Grat Britain, Canada, gypt and many othr countris. Th handiworks④on show wr vry xquisit⑤. W wr all attractd by som small ancint Chins wapons, such as swords, broadswords⑥.Two of thm just lik th broadswords usd by Zhang Fi and Guan Yu, th snior gnrals in th Thr Kingdoms. All ths wapons wr mad of thick wir. Thy wr praisd by vry visitor.

Through th show, w hav known th strong points of othrs, spcially w hav sn somthing nw and wondrful. W all hop w can hold anothr show in th nar futur.

(选自1987年7月7日《上海学生英文报》)

【词语解释】

①sktch [sktM] n.速写,素描

②wll-don['wl'd)n] a.干得好;做得好

③pnmanship['pnm+nMip] n.书法;书写

④handiwork ['h$ndiw+:k] n.手工;手工制品

⑤xquisit['kskwizit]a.精美的;精细的

⑥broadsword['br&:ds&:d] n.大刀

【写法指要】

本文是典型的三段式作文。第一段是引言段,作者用反转法(turnabout)引入篇题“our class hld a spcial show”。第二段是扩充段,第一句是主题句,接下来的支撑部分(support)分为两个层次:“lots of picturs”和“works of pnmanship and stamps”,都是用举例法来展开主题的,有的用了“such as”衔接词,有的没用(如:from th U.S. A, Grat Britain…)。第三段是结尾段,用总结全文,提出希望的方法结束文章。

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